Do you like my short story? *need comments!*?

hmm Nice story. I like very much but it was not short. Lol. well i think so your story is kind of a lesson. I mean thats very normal in high school when people make fun of u and everybody want to become popular. I think high school is the worst part of a teenager life, becuz they a lot of bad people and good people, but when teenager p this stage they have a bright future. Thx for the story